No Darling...I was not speaking about your email or poem.
Both were very sincere and it was nice of you to take the time to write me. Someone one else has been leaving me very nasty emails which I didnt appreciate...I guess I have made enemies here(?)
I digress...your poem was great.
I very much enjoyed it and hope that you receive the answers to the questions that you seek.
As for pointers...I have none. Only to write from your heart.
My poems tell a story...
Have you figured out the story?
I appreciate the support that you have shown by reading them and giving your opinions of them.
Also there are many other story tellers here that are more talented than I...I hope you have read their writings as you have read mine...I highly enjoy the writings of IO and Dragonzzz.
Also...the mysterious "The Father" has many interestingly delicious insights that are wonderfully well thought and well written.
Take the time to check these out and I will try to email you back A.S.A.P
ÇhÿñåÇåt